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2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:36 am

Today is the day that I release my fourth Title which is called 2016 Again?


The book is basically about my theory of mine. I believe that the timeline that we're on is an Alternative timeline and we've already met our end. I put a story together to make people think about our future and the possibility of us spiraling down the same path that ended us on this alternative timeline. I'm not saying that the events didn't happen, but i'm not saying it couldn't either. Who knows what the world would be like in 6 to seven decades from now in which the story takes place.

Find 2016 on:

http://www.Amazon.com/2016Again?
http://www.BarnesNNoble.com
www.BooksAMillion.com

I would like to here everyone thoughts about this idea, so make a discussion about it go crazy on it. Not totally but please keep me informed.



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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Dusak » Thu Mar 17, 2016 12:12 pm

Well, I tried the two links but I seem to be on another time line as al I got on the Amazon one was buy a Trump for president cap or tea shirt, the other contained nothing only adverts. This would probably have intrigued BM if he was still on. :lol: Still, best of luck. :up
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by newcastle » Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:10 pm

Dusak wrote:Well, I tried the two links but I seem to be on another time line as al I got on the Amazon one was buy a Trump for president cap or tea shirt, the other contained nothing only adverts. This would probably have intrigued BM if he was still on. :lol: Still, best of luck. :up
"2016 Again" is not yet available on Amazon.

You can check for Frater's works on Amazon Books under Terrell Frazier.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Brian Yare » Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:42 pm

You can find a video of Frater at

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Thu Mar 17, 2016 2:30 pm

Brian Yare wrote:You can find a video of Frater at

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Thanks again everyone for the support!

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Dusak » Thu Mar 17, 2016 8:58 pm

Nice to be able to put a face to the name as most of us on here look like cartoon characters in our avatars as well as real life. :lol: BUT , why post a link if that link is not yet available? You wasted ten seconds of my life. :P
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Fri Mar 18, 2016 1:54 pm

Dusak wrote:Nice to be able to put a face to the name as most of us on here look like cartoon characters in our avatars as well as real life. :lol: BUT , why post a link if that link is not yet available? You wasted ten seconds of my life. :P

Sorry I really am.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Sat Mar 19, 2016 1:37 am

Okay so its ready now

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Wed Mar 23, 2016 12:57 pm

Let me know how you guys feel about my two books "Amarna Princesses" and "2016 Again?"

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Sat Jun 25, 2016 5:23 am

The basis behind this book still puzzles me and I strongly worry about our future and to me its not a good one.

I fear that mankind will be enslaved again by the this group called the Annunaki who maybe looking for some kind of gold and ancient person. I fear man has come to lax and we have become violent towards each other. I fear our ignorance is going to lead to our downfall again and I hope I'm wrong.

This book will have many wondering are we on an alternative timeline and are we truly heading back to the same ending?

On that note I'll let you decide an answer to these questions.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by HEPZIBAH » Sat Jun 25, 2016 10:50 am

Frater008, I am assuming your books are self published. Do you get people to proof read and edit before you publish?
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by newcastle » Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:25 pm

I've only read (or tried to read) Memoir of a Lost Life.

It's very obvious that was not proof read or edited.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Horus » Sat Jun 25, 2016 1:16 pm

My Kindle reader must have gone on the blink, when I had a quick look all the indexing and chapters were all over the place and I struggled to get past the all the phonetics at the very beginning.
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Sat Jun 25, 2016 2:21 pm

HEPZIBAH wrote:Frater008, I am assuming your books are self published. Do you get people to proof read and edit before you publish?
Yeah I did and no I attempted to proof read myself. So I guess my books are flops huh.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by HEPZIBAH » Sat Jun 25, 2016 5:31 pm

Frater0082 wrote:
HEPZIBAH wrote:Frater008, I am assuming your books are self published. Do you get people to proof read and edit before you publish?
Yeah I did and no I attempted to proof read myself. So I guess my books are flops huh.
It is always important to proof read your own transcripts before publication but it is also wise to get others to proof read them for you too. If you have written your books in the same style of poor English as your posts, and not corrected them - it is often easy to miss your own faults when doing your own proof reading because you are so used to your own ways - then it would seem you may well have flops on your hands.
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by LovelyLadyLux » Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:32 pm

There is a trend now with more self published books. Some are quite good but the one thing I find lacking with many of them is the proof-reading/editing. It is more than annoying to get halfway through a fairly decent story only to have a sentence read wrong and you really don't know what the author means - i.e. - did the author actually mean IF or did the author really mean IS. Can be a world of different to a story.

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by HEPZIBAH » Sat Jun 25, 2016 7:00 pm

LovelyLadyLux wrote:There is a trend now with more self published books. Some are quite good but the one thing I find lacking with many of them is the proof-reading/editing. It is more than annoying to get halfway through a fairly decent story only to have a sentence read wrong and you really don't know what the author means - i.e. - did the author actually mean IF or did the author really mean IS. Can be a world of different to a story.
Not to mention the importance of well placed punctuation.
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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by LovelyLadyLux » Sun Jun 26, 2016 1:59 am

Definitely ( :oops: since I forgot to put a :?: behind my own question :oops: )

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Sun Jun 26, 2016 6:18 pm

Thanks for the advice

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Re: 2016 Again?

Post by Frater0082 » Thu Jan 26, 2017 2:58 am

Totally re-done and re-edited. This story is also important to me because I believe that we are on an alternative timeline and I fear that we are heading back down the same path like we were before. The original timeline is the future and i'm scared to repeat it.

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