A year or two ago I added some comments to some pictures in the photo comp and was accused by a certain member of being arogant or something of the kind. The comments were things like, 'if you had levelled the horizon it would have improved the picture; or, an increase in contrast would add definition etc, etc' I thought that was what the comments box was for, as well as approving compliments.....
That said, I always welcome constructive comments and criticisms about my own pics because it helps me to view things from anothers viewpoint.
Now the point of this post. Kiya and I have corresponded via PM etc during the period that she was considering the purchase of her new camera. I think we now have a friendly relationship.
We all acknowledge that Kiyas pictures have come on apace since her recent purchase and I would like to make some observations on some of her latest postings. Comments are from one persons point of view and not necessarilly a concensus and are there to be accepted or rejected.
I hope Kiya will accept my comments with the good intent that they are offered.....if that is arogance, just tell me.
1) Kiya, your pictures all show a very true horizon, if that is after correction it means you have recognised the need

If there is no correction then you are holding your camera extremely well
2) The picture of the two kids walking into the water is very pleasing, composition is spot on for me but if you could have changed your angle to exclude the moored boat the image would have been SO much stronger.
3) I like the picture of the two Laser boats on the beach. However, it is very symmetrical with a mass of beach to the left, sea to the right and the boats dead centre. Thinking 'rule of thirds' I copied the picture and re-cropped it to put the boats off centre to left and right. I didn't have much of the frame to play with but in my opinion the one to the left is best and introduces the eye to the sea, the natural place for the boats. Hope you agree......
4) Many of your pictures have an enormous amount of detail and lack a focus. Perhaps if you zoomed in on say one brightly coloured boat and let the rest become background, there would be more focus in the image.
Hope you accept these comments as observations to be accepted or rejected.......just trying to share a little experience.
