Danielle Steele - Family Ties
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:18 am
I have just contributed this to a Facebook reading group so please excuse me for copying and pasting to here.
I recently read Danielle Steel's Family Ties. What a badly written book! She has the makings of a good story with her main characters and (thin) plotline, but it was totally wasted. I don't think I've ever seen so many sentences begin with 'And', which is rarely necessary and should really only be used for emphasis. She also over did repetition. A situation would be described, and within the same paragraph or the next one, the same or virtually the same words would be used to describe the same situation. I never felt any of the situtions warrented the reminder, never mind badly done, and it became insulting to the reader. There were times when you could be forgiven for thinking that three or four different people had written the book!
I do recall a time when I could devour Danielle Steel books - admittedly some were better than others - but either she has lost her touch (success making her churn them out to meet the demands of the lowest common denominator/ quality really doesn't matter) or else I have become a more discerning and demanding reader.
I recently read Danielle Steel's Family Ties. What a badly written book! She has the makings of a good story with her main characters and (thin) plotline, but it was totally wasted. I don't think I've ever seen so many sentences begin with 'And', which is rarely necessary and should really only be used for emphasis. She also over did repetition. A situation would be described, and within the same paragraph or the next one, the same or virtually the same words would be used to describe the same situation. I never felt any of the situtions warrented the reminder, never mind badly done, and it became insulting to the reader. There were times when you could be forgiven for thinking that three or four different people had written the book!
I do recall a time when I could devour Danielle Steel books - admittedly some were better than others - but either she has lost her touch (success making her churn them out to meet the demands of the lowest common denominator/ quality really doesn't matter) or else I have become a more discerning and demanding reader.