IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem
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IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem
IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE
As I lay here dreaming,
Forming pictures in my mind.
I conjured up a lady fair,
Sweet natured, warm and kind.
I see this creature as I dream,
With all her charms most proud.
Her tempting eyes beholding me,
And teases me aloud.
A temptress she, would beckon me,
Provocative and beguiling.
Her rounded form to tempt me more,
Her bewitching spell in smiling.
Curvaceous; sensual and arousing,
Ti's her loveliness appealing.
Drunk with excitement I would be,
In ample arms concealing.
Seductive nights I'd lay with her,
Voluptuous breasts alluring.
Plentiful and comforting,
My passion's lust procuring.
Reuben's brush with skill to paint,
Abundant women's form.
Could not have captured her so fair,
A perfect female born.
Attractive and enticing,
though substantial she may be.
As Venus overflowing,
My goddess is to me.
Aphrodite too, her merits had.
Deity of love divine.
But my lovely living version ,
A Woman of Substance, forever mine.
Composed by Wizard for Luxor4U 04/06/2006
As I lay here dreaming,
Forming pictures in my mind.
I conjured up a lady fair,
Sweet natured, warm and kind.
I see this creature as I dream,
With all her charms most proud.
Her tempting eyes beholding me,
And teases me aloud.
A temptress she, would beckon me,
Provocative and beguiling.
Her rounded form to tempt me more,
Her bewitching spell in smiling.
Curvaceous; sensual and arousing,
Ti's her loveliness appealing.
Drunk with excitement I would be,
In ample arms concealing.
Seductive nights I'd lay with her,
Voluptuous breasts alluring.
Plentiful and comforting,
My passion's lust procuring.
Reuben's brush with skill to paint,
Abundant women's form.
Could not have captured her so fair,
A perfect female born.
Attractive and enticing,
though substantial she may be.
As Venus overflowing,
My goddess is to me.
Aphrodite too, her merits had.
Deity of love divine.
But my lovely living version ,
A Woman of Substance, forever mine.
Composed by Wizard for Luxor4U 04/06/2006
Last edited by WIZARD on Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:27 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Thank you Hepzi, I'm glad you liked this poem and I'm pleased it made you happy. I hope others like it too.




Last edited by WIZARD on Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:00 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wiz that is a lovely poem i really enjoyed it Thanx 

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[face=Comic Sans MS]As 'Women of Substance' are quite topical again on another thread I thought I resurrect this poem of Wiz's. It was commisioned at a time when we larger ladies were getting a bit of a bashing on the forum somewhile ago. [/face]

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Re: IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem
I wrote this poem for Hepzi, at her request, and now, reading it again two years, I wouldn't change a word.WIZARD wrote:IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE
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