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IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem

Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:11 pm
by WIZARD
IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE

As I lay here dreaming,
Forming pictures in my mind.
I conjured up a lady fair,
Sweet natured, warm and kind.

I see this creature as I dream,
With all her charms most proud.
Her tempting eyes beholding me,
And teases me aloud.

A temptress she, would beckon me,
Provocative and beguiling.
Her rounded form to tempt me more,
Her bewitching spell in smiling.

Curvaceous; sensual and arousing,
Ti's her loveliness appealing.
Drunk with excitement I would be,
In ample arms concealing.

Seductive nights I'd lay with her,
Voluptuous breasts alluring.
Plentiful and comforting,
My passion's lust procuring.

Reuben's brush with skill to paint,
Abundant women's form.
Could not have captured her so fair,
A perfect female born.

Attractive and enticing,
though substantial she may be.
As Venus overflowing,
My goddess is to me.

Aphrodite too, her merits had.
Deity of love divine.
But my lovely living version ,
A Woman of Substance, forever mine.


Composed by Wizard for Luxor4U 04/06/2006

Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:55 pm
by HEPZIBAH
:clap: :br: :br: :br: :clap:
[face=Comic Sans MS]Wiz you are a wonder and a poet too,
You've accepted the challenge, so it's biscuits with tea for you. ;)

What a wonderful Wiz you are. :) [/face]

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:15 am
by WIZARD
Thank you Hepzi, I'm glad you liked this poem and I'm pleased it made you happy. I hope others like it too.

:D :D :D

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:49 am
by tut bar dancer
Wiz that is a lovely poem i really enjoyed it Thanx :)

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:06 am
by Trixx
Keep it up Wiz :br: :br:

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:57 am
by WIZARD
Oooo Trixx, what DO you mean :?: ;)

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:39 am
by Trixx
Now Now Wiz :oops::oops:;);):lol:

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:03 am
by WIZARD
Careful sunshine, or I might just end up writing a poem about you. :) :lol: :P ;)

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:19 am
by Kiya
I really enjoyed your poem Wiz, keep em coming :) :D

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:47 pm
by niletraveller
Thank you for a lovely poem.
Hope you don't mind if I print it and frame it?

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:05 pm
by WIZARD
I'm so pleased you think my work good enough to print and frame NT. I am truly flattered. :D

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:17 pm
by PRchick
That's really beautiful, Wiz. No wonder all the ladies like you. :)

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:21 pm
by WIZARD
Thank you PR. You're very kind. :)

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:02 pm
by sue
That was a wonderful poem Wiz I love the way your poems unfold and take me on a journey of feeling filled with images.

Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 6:30 am
by WIZARD
What a lovely description of my work Sue. Your insight is remarkable. Thank you.

Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:22 pm
by FABlux
That is a wonderful poem Wiz. I hope you don't mind me passing it on to a friend as well, it is too good not to share? :tu:

Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:46 pm
by little_angel_204
Really nice poem wiz :)

Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 1:40 pm
by Phantom
Wow Wiz, I didn't realise that you actually wrote it !

:)

Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 2:04 pm
by HEPZIBAH
[face=Comic Sans MS]As 'Women of Substance' are quite topical again on another thread I thought I resurrect this poem of Wiz's. It was commisioned at a time when we larger ladies were getting a bit of a bashing on the forum somewhile ago. [/face]

Re: IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem

Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 3:59 pm
by WIZARD
WIZARD wrote:IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE
I wrote this poem for Hepzi, at her request, and now, reading it again two years, I wouldn't change a word.